this poem was in the drafts for a few days now! Still crude, do let me know where I can improve!
Oh girl,
oh girl! Dont worry
because I am sorry
for not growing up with you.
Now I promise to hold, when you get old
and I will always make you feel special.
Oh baby,
oh baby! Dont haste
because I will not waste
this chance to be with you
come any despiar or struggle,
and I will always make you feel special
Oh girl,
Oh girl! Dont pretend
because I will understand
those feelings and desires unvocal
because I will always make you feel special.
My girl,
my girl! Dont cry
because I will try
try to make you smile.
Touches, caresses, hugs, kisses
to let you know
I am always here, for me you are special.
S.E.R.E.N.D.I.P.I.T.Y
3 years ago
WOW !!!
ReplyDeleteWhere do u get motivation to write such stuff ... i hope i'll write one like this someday :P
"those feelings and desires unvocal" .. best line :))
haha previous one was better syed bhai :P
ReplyDeleteyea that line is very good, agreed !
Thanks for commenting ;)
O gal O gal...
ReplyDeleteshekhu...first you swear that watever to wrote u donna do that wit ur gal :P :P..
i m sure she will b lucky
lucky.. eh? whats that? :P
ReplyDeletelovely poem..........the gal will surely feel special aftr reading this.
ReplyDeletehidden talent huh?? ;) nice though
ReplyDeletety ;)
ReplyDeletenice poem brooo...its brilliant
ReplyDeletebtw welcome to blogworld
i am ur yahoo cric 1 chatroom frnd steph remember me naaa
check my blog dude
http://www.thesolitarywriter.blogspot.com/
gud stuff..bt is it truly you feeling!!itz hard to make a relationship like dis..nt easy to make sumone feel like dis..bt if u r really believe in LOVE..itz the most beautiful thing in the WORLD :)
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